Thumbnail 10 different possibilities of each of your characters.
Look for at least 15 reference images for each character (may include world, props, outfits, gear, etc.)
Choose your best thumbnails and develop each character.
Thumbnail 10 different possibilities of each of your characters.
Look for at least 15 reference images for each character (may include world, props, outfits, gear, etc.)
Choose your best thumbnails and develop each character.
Jess
bar: I like how you left the corrections over it so we can see what you are going to do. I love this scene. The only thing I have to say about it is add more elements that go with the time period where we can see them and easily identify them.
Characters: These characters are great, I love your style! I agree that the mouse, robot, and bunny need to be redone because they are a little hard to read. But the woman and the cat are easily recognizable.
Expressions: I don't believe anything needs to be done here. Color would definitely be fun! It's so easy to see every expression.
Turnaround: I love this character. The only thing that bothers me would probably be...well I understand she's a saggy old woman but maybe she's a little too saggy in this turnaround? Haha but that's just be my opinion
opposites: I agree that the second character needs to be redone. He just doesn't compare to the first character. A more active and interesting pose would definitely do the trick.
Midterm: Your character sheet looks really good. The colors look awesome and I like the layout. Maybe just blow up the action poses and expressions a little more to take up some empty space.
Kathryn
midterm: I hope you realized you spelled your own character's name wrong. That might need to be fixed lol Otherwise it looks good. I like the action poses and the colors. I would give her gun a little more detail because it doesn't really look like a gun to me right now.
Opposites: These two are super cute. All I would say is work on proportions and maybe their feet. Like maybe give them some recognizable hooves or something.
Characters: Yeah I think there is a little confusion as to how old Angella is or should be. Maybe Timmy shouldn't have a bat-a-rang for copyright reasons haha I really like the character designs overall. I don't think much needs to be fixed other than what has been said.
Alburt: The first thing I noticed was how his body shape changes a little with every angle. Make sure he stays the same round elephant shape through-out the turnaround. He's looking a little skinny at the beginning and fatter at the end. And I would say make his mustache stick out from his face in the profile view because it looks more flat right now than I think a mustache should be.
Alburt expressions: I would first of all like to see this redone in black because it's a little hard to see right now. I can see what you were going for in a couple of the faces but its harder to read some than others. They're all similar and I think his expressions could be pushed a lot more.
Restaurant: This looks like a great place to eat but wherever do we sit?! I still think this needs some tables and chairs for your customers. The stairs are a nice touch but maybe you need to lose them to be able to see some of the more important elements that would really make it a Mexican restaurant?
LadyInu
turnaround: Very cute. I think you still have some proportion issues going on and some lines going across would really help you keep the dog looking the same from every angle. Really that's all I think you need here. Follow those lines!!
super kitty: Everything you do is so cute. The idea is good but I think this could use more cat-like elements so we can easily see what's going on here. Like maybe a tail or some whiskers?
Expressions 1 and 2: I wish I could see the entire page on the second one!! I love his happy face on the first page. The sad one is a good idea but I feel like it would work better if we could see his face from the front and see the tears pouring down his face. Good job!
Bunny: Its definitely a bunny. And a butler. Good job. I think, same as super kitty, it could use some whiskers and maybe some bunny buck teeth!
Dog: This guy looks awesome! Quite the improvement from the first one. I'm loving the bubbles coming out of his pipe. I think maybe he could be redone with his body in proportion with his ginormous head. Unless that was the style you were going for?
Baby: I think the mouth around the pacifier was a good choice. I remember you didn't have that in the first one and I think it makes it easier to understand. I like the dress and hat a lot, all she's missing is some fingers and toes!
Opposites: Looking good. Again some small proportion issues and I'd like to see it inked. I think it could use more detail in her costume too. Like folds in the skirt and maybe a symbol on her chest for her superhero name. I love how she's the awesome super chick and he's the creepy stalker. Haha
bear: I love this guy. I remember he was the bear musician and he definitely looks like a bear so I think he could really use more elements that say musician. Some clothes and maybe a hat and some details on the saxophone would really help. Being a saxophonist myself I'm allowed to be picky. ;) Keep up the good work!
India
The turnaround looks great! It's very clean and the colors look awesome. Some lines might be needed going across just for us to see what you did but it really looks good from every angle. The barbershop looks so cool. Great job with all the little details! I think my favorite part is the window. I would have never thought to make the shop's sign backwards even though that seems to be the most obvious thing to do. :P